The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six-Part 6 B *UPDATE* 5/03/12

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The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six-Part 6 B *UPDATE* 5/03/12

PostPosted by peasant007 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:31 pm

Hi there! Welcome to the Devereaux Legacy! All of my chapters have been converted to Slideshare format, so it would be best to view them in Full Screen mode.

Oh, and if you're a BRAND NEW READER (Hi there! Thanks for poking your head in!), the first couple chapters are rough. Really rough. Fortunately I change to a narrative format around Chapter 2.3 (It's the Bee's Knees!). It's not *terribly* necessary to read the first three chapters, I suppose. But if you want to...well, you've been warned!

I hope you all enjoy it :D

In the Beginning: Joshua
Just Your Average Legacy* *Averageness Subject to Change

Chapter Two: Ansley
I'm a Total Slacker
What Do You Do With a BA in English?
It's the Bee's Knees!

Chapter Three: Sebastian
Underdog
Vagrant Squatter
Hope Floats, Stupid Bounces
Comfortably Numb
Life in a Bottle Part 1
Life in a Bottle Part 2

Interlude:
A Devereaux Legacy Interlude: The Voices of Pleasantview

Chapter Four: Mary
A Toast to New Beginnings
Good Intentions
Fruhm Hoh Oresha Hoh
Two Weddings and a Courthouse
Perfection Lost
On a Pale Horse

Chapter Five: Eden
A Star is Born PANTS EMBARGO!

Zane's Bachelor Challenge is actually important to the overall story, so I am including it in the main list of links.
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day One
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day Two
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day Three
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day Four
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day Five
Zane's Bachelor Challenge Day Six

Around the World in 20 Days
Time Marches On (A)
Time Marches On (B)
Or So They Say...(A)
Or So They Say...(B)
Moving Along (A)
Moving Along (B)
The Honeymooners (Accidental Interlude)
There's a Fine, Fine Line

Chapter Six: Erin and Quinn
Baby Steps
The Gathering Storm
Popular
Family Ties
House of Cards
Sins of the Father (A)
Sins of the Father (B) *NEW*

Extras:
Project Pleasantview Angers Many!
Zane is kinda Mary-Sue-ish Zane scores rather high on the Mary-Sue Litmus test. Some spoilers.
Zane Meta Plus a whole bunch of pictures!
Devereaux Legacy 2010 Christmas Special
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by msnorrington » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:06 pm

OKay so here comes my rambling comment as I read your latest update...

Spoiler:
okay, can I just have it put on the record that Bottom is a beeotch?

Fleetwood is hawt!

Charles and the video game... I guffawed out loud.

Quinn's expression at the porn comment is fucking priceless! (by the by, which pose box or whatever makes sims eyes roll like that?)

Watching Quinn and Bella... you ever watch or read Stephen King's 'The Stand"? Well, they remind me of that book. Poor Harold making a pack with Satan's bride to be Nadine Cross. I do hope that this too doesn't end in an explosion and numerous deaths ;)

And I knew it was Erin who stopped by for a booty call

Oh, poor Emily! Damn it Eden! If she hadn't interfered in the first place, Quinn wouldn't be macking with the devil's pawn!

Ya know, I almost feel sorry for Alexander Goth... almost. He's like the Hippie who gave birth to the republican. Or vice versa.

Well Erin, maybe Puck just isn't attracted to loose women, you whore.... sorry. don't know where that came from. guess Erin doesn't do it for me yet.

Rhys and Eden... while not my fav couple, they do take great pictures together. That man has some awesome sex faces :lol:

Listen to the doubts Quinn! She's just a piece of ass with an extremely heavy price! Run!

Oh Quinn.. you sweet stupid fool. Ya know, I've never seen Bella Goth up close before. She's quite creepy looking.

Ya know, I don't usually like Rhys but I'm really feeling for him here. Maybe I just want someone to save Quinn before he manages to destroy my beloved Devereauxs with his actions!!!!

Oh please, that's Lillian's plan? To have Bella and Rhys sleep together? He may be a manwhore but he'd never cheat on Eden. I see a lot of lying and manipulation to pull this off. And if Quinn is stupid enough to believe his father would step out on his mother, well he deserves whatever STD Bella can give him...

OKay, take a breath Liz. Yeesh, I'm taking this waaaay too seriously :roll:

AAAAUUUUUUHGHGHH!!!! Love Potion?! So much for that breath :evil:

:lol: Gotta love Bella in the background of Quinn's devestation.

Yeesh... can I just choke Quinn now before he gets stupider and I get mad enough to take it out on a real person?

Okay... I'm done and have absolutely nothing intelligent to say. You've taken my guts through the blender and I cringe because it's only going to get worse before it gets better. And I'll be back for more cause I'm addicted and you're my tamborine man. Gotta love ya :D

ps: as for my mean, thoughtless opinions about Quinn, Erin, Bottom and whoever, don't worry. I totally get who they are and their motivation and why they do what they do. You've written then all well and their actions make complete sense. My calling Quinn an idiot is like stepping out in zero degree weather in a pair of manties and screaming "F&CK Me!" It's not an invitation, just a kneejerk response.
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by muleofthefoxxes » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:10 pm

Great update! I'd comment on more specific, but I'm feeling a bit sickly lately. Maybe next time!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by peasant007 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:06 pm

Woooo! Comments! Better yet: REPLIES to the comments on the same day! I'm ~productive~ :D


LiZ:

Spoiler:
Well, we learned something new about New Boolprop: no censors, lol. Seriously, your comment had me rolling.

Oh, Bottom totally is. She's and elf and you know how they are about being elitists.

Quinn's expression to the porn thing is actually one of the "Waiting in line" animations from OFB. He's in an unmodified animation, straight up Maxis, but I learned that if a Sim is locked in a static pose from a posebox, their faces still move. That knowledge has been incredibly helpful and makes the Sims look more animated.

I HAVE read "The Stand" and the Nadine/Harold thing always goes through my mind when I write for Bella and Quinn. You know, except Bella lets Quinn go all the way with her.

It's okay to blame Eden. She totally overreacted because she didn't want to face the facts. So blame for future events can be partially laid at her feet.

*snerk* I think Alexander is more Republican and Zach would be the hippie liberal, though I view my Sims as more political moderates than anything mainly because *I'M* not terribly political and if I were, I'd be a moderate. I can see the pros and cons of both sides.

Actually, and it will come up the next chapter, Erin is "being loose" because she's looking for "that one person." She has a feeling that there is someone and she's kind of drifting because of it. It's more Puck's fault than anything because he does know that he's that person. As for not liking Erin all that much, it's understandable. I knew that she'd either be really liked, or really hated because she's "that girl."

Of course Rhys and Eden aren't your favorite couple: it would be very disloyal to Sebastian and Kitty :P The big smile, "I just had sex" look always makes me laugh no matter which Sim is wearing it.

I think Bella Goth looks creepy because I didn't moderate any of her facial expression by adding a neutral facial overlay, so her face is pulling in an overly animated, straight up Maxis way. Because the face template for Bella is standard Face 2, which is the face that Mary and Zane have/had.

Poor Rhys. Just when he thought that his life as a legacy husband was going to be easy because Mary was dead, he learns that he still has to deal with new and improved BS.

Oh, no, that's not Lillian's plan. That's Bella's plan. Lillian's plan is...well, I'm not saying. Bella just *thinks* she knows what Lillian's plan is. And you are right about Rhys: he is literally effing everywhere, but to give him credit, whenever he gets married, he doesn't cheat on his spouse.

Quinn has always been they type to be misled. He lacks a lot of self-confidence, and now that his image of Rhys is completely shattered? Yeah...

And now I have the "Mr. Tambourine Man" song stuck in my head :P

And I don't mind that you reacted the way you did. I WANT people to react strongly to my stuff :D So your comment just makes me realize that I've succeeded!

Thank you for being the first one to comment on the new forum! *\o/*



Muleofthefoxxes:

Thank you so much for reading! I hope you feel better!


New forums! Yay!

New chapter is actually outlined in detail (for the most part). I would like to have it written before the end of the year and hopefully filmed a week or so after that. So, hopefully a new update at the beginning of 2012. Or, if I'm feeling particularly ambitious, before the end of THIS year.

But, knowing me, it'll be 2012. So we'll go with that :D

Thank you everyone for commenting and for following me to the new Boolprop forums!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by nicbemused » Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:45 pm

Congrats on the successful transfer!

Spoiler:
Sigh. Poor Quinn, an idiot and having to deal with his father's feet of clay (seriously, why didn't Erin ever say anything). That boy has some major growing up to do, though. Erin, for all her drifting, seems far far better equipped to handle the responsibilities of being a legacy heir than Quinn does. And I think Eden went too far in the opposite direction from her mother. Also, I see nothing but tragedy ahead for a while. I feel bad for Eden and Rhys.
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by SilverBelle » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:41 pm

Ang:

So new forum = comment at last from me.
Spoiler:
Agreeing with Liz here: Bottom is a beeotch. But again, too much knowledge of mythology makes me understand where she comes from in a way. I mean, who would want to give up the ability to play with the boring little mortal souls?

Loving Quinn’s face when Fleetwood mentions porn.

Oh, Bella. As if I didn’t have enough reason to dislike you. Leave Quinn alone (best crazy Brittany fan voice).

*laugh* Only a Romance Sim brother would be so cool about his little sister ‘hooing in the room down the hall from his.

It’s kind of odd to see Erin’s side of her relationship with Puck. After all, we know as he does, that they’re going to end up together. So she doesn’t understand yet why there’s such a pull between them. I cannot wait to see him finally give into his fate and them getting together.

I shall not say anything more about Bella and what she’s doing to Quinn, because I will start saying very bad things. But she’s something that rhymes with witch all right.

Oh, boy. I can see where things are going, and I don’t like it. I don’t like it one bit! But I shall read it all, because I need to see all the gory details.

I’m really getting frustrated with Rhys’ inability or unwillingness (probably a combination of both) to put how he feels into words, and not allowing Eden to do it either. This would prevent so many complications that I see coming.

Great chapter, and I can’t wait for more!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by animeangel1983 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:02 pm

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Quinn, the naivete of youth...Bella will bury you. Leave before you go down with her. :shok: But yeah, kids trying to find their own way I think we can all relate to that in one way or another. I said I'd comment on the new board and so I am. Bottom and Puck...reminds me of how the gods took to being mortal in the Xena series. It's easy to look down when you think you're on the top of the world, but looking back up is far harder. Erin will understand the pull between her and Puck soon enough, Fate works in mysterious ways...Umm, let's see...what else was I going to say? *thinks* I forgot. :blush:
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by SimAddicted13 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 5:04 am

Long time lurker here, finally got the courage to step up and comment.

Spoiler:
First of all, let me just say this has now become one of my favourite legacies of all time. I love all the twists and turns your story has taken in the last few chapters, I love your legacy mythos, and especially the way you've developed your characters. They all seem so real to me, almost like real life people, from the most intense reactions in important plot scenes down to the little everyday life details.
And, for some reason, your legacy is the only one where I don't dislike Rhys Fitzhugh, and have even grown quite fond of your legacy world's version of him (Not that there is anything wrong with the way smoothiequeen originally wrote him, or with any other legacy writers' version of him - for some reason I could never bring myself to sympathize with him or like his character before, no matter who was writing him.)
I am incredibly jealous of your staging skills, too, but in a good way, I guess, because that jealousy has only made me want to try and improve my own skills. :) Pictures as the one of the girls' sleepover and their pillow fort were just amazing.
(Being yet another Doctor Who fan, though a reasonably recent one, I have also enjoyed seeing the references pop up every now and then. Looking forward to more.)
Well, I guess that sums it up (not a very coherent comment, but at least I did finally comment). As this is a general comment, I think I'll better not go into gushing over plot details, or I'd be here all day. So you can expect a detailed and likely overly long comment after your next chapter. :D
Keep up the excellent work!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by ShadowGem » Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:01 pm

All squished together trying to remember where I left off.
Spoiler:
first of all Poor Zane :,( *snuggles Zane*
I love seeing the Reaper office that is Awesome!
aww Puck *hugs*
Bella and Lillian O.o
I absolutely love the interaction between Erin, Quinn, Rhys and Eden!
Eden and Rhys never fail to make me laugh XD

LOL at the interaction between Puck and Bottom. I love what you are doing with him having the Apartment and commuting to college. This is the first time, I think, I've seen a legacy writer set up a storyline like that. :)
Poor Quinn and Emily :(
Lol I love Charles' Reactions to Grand Theft Auto XD
OMG QUINN STAY AWAY FROM BELLA!
Those are definitely Eden and Rhys' kids LMAO
Love how Erin summarized college for Eden
Erin and Puck = <333
btw when I saw the name Chris/Christina I was like O.o since that is my real name Christina. (and i'm called Chris) It's Just weird seeing it LOL.
*grabs some daggers fireworks and a piece of string* sooo Bella Goth..... *evil grin* *cough*canikillher?*cough*
Erin's conversation with her parents was cute
And then Quinn's revelation o.o
Bella is EEEVILLL
*still has fireworks, daggers and string, adding coffee* caniiiiii? Bella's annoying me LOl but you are doing an awesome job with that (hopefully that's what you meant to do if not SORRYYY)
Love how you had the Fitzhugh Legacy on there
Oh Rhys
Wow everything is going into the tornado to be spit out it seems
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by Mzyra » Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:54 pm

And now I can read the update! :D
Spoiler:
would you believe it, I almost forgot to write something on this slide
Were you distracted by the nudity Ang? *raises eyebrow* :P
And LOL at the dismissal of Puck having self-determination X)

Oh, come on Bottom, don't be mean - we want to be able to like you, but we all love Puck, so if you're going to be mean to him...!
*Sigh* Well we'll show her - Puck'll fall in love and him and Erin will have kids and he'll be fine with dying (all conjecture >.>), so there!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, poor Emily *pets her* And poor Quinn in general *sigh*
Oh, Charles is so adorably Regency British X) *pets his curly hair in amusement* Regency gentlemen watching GTA - BRB, LOLing forever! I love how cracktastic these things get X)
Poor Quinn, it seems like everyone he knows is obsessed with sex and stuff :P *stares at sudden picture on slide 35* Er... Do I want to read this? >.> Oh. Subtle, Bella. Subtle.
Oh Quinn, how are you soooooo oblivious? I guess it's 'Miss Lily' and her key and magic and everything, but my god... Somebody needs a suspicion upgrade...
I see that Erin has inherited her father's capacity for shame X) Although why does she even need to ask what her parents do to fill their time? :P Awww, but she looks like she could be very good friends with Louise and Star :)

Awwwwwww, Emily! ;.; *whacks Bella repeatedly with a lamp*
Aww, twins marrying twins. Very cute ^.^
LOOOOOL, poor Puck. But Erin certainly knows what she wants...! XD

*sigh* I know this scene. Oh Puck, two years is a very long time to be being silly and wasting an unfortunate girl's time *sigh*

QUINN DEVEREAUX, YOU MAY BE ADORABLE, BUT WHHHHYYYY CAN'T YOU BE MORE SUSPICIOUS?!

Oh dude, Erin could totally kick Alexander's ass, I'm sure :D
Er, Rhys, you may want to be gentler with your rather sensitive son on the subject of his future wife... >.>
Pffft, practically everything's 'incestuous' once you involve certain sims X)
*sigh* I'd like to be able to celebrate the fact that they were able to come together and calm down, except for the fact that that just happens to not be a good thing to do in this particular situation -.-'

... Lillian's going to kill Bella. I have mixed feelings about this *shifty* Mostly I don't understand why Bella can't see that coming when Lillian is so clearly evil :P
I do not like Bella, but her completely shameless primping and things in the background of Quinn's emotional destruction is kind of funny.
QUINN, your constant inability to understand anything of what's going on is getting to me. PLEASE get a clue.
Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh, I like this family too much for this to be happening to it ;.; Stop arguing Rhys, you're making the children (see: me, and probably other readers) sad ;.;

I first came across Rhys in the Bohemian Legacy, and he was an adorably good father in that too :) Kinda skewed my view on him everytime since, tbh ;)
Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh. One of my favourite families is going to start falling apart. Obviously the only way for you to make up for this is to update soon so that I can angst about it more because it's all amazingly written and shot :D
But seriously, looking forward to the next update!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by BigLenny » Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:05 am

So sorry for the late comment. I just got done with finals, and only now do I get the chance to read it.

Spoiler:
I laughed at Charles’s expression as he watched Zach playing Grand Theft Auto. :lol: Poor guy.

Now to Puck. Basically, his expression at nude Erin made me giggle, even though I should have felt guilty about it due to his feelings. But, as always, Erin and Puck are awesome together, that is all.

Agreed with what others said regarding Bella. I mean, poor Emily. I have a ton of nasty words to describe Bella, especially since she managed to seduce Quinn. :s_mad

Yes, we want that tyrant Alexander Goth down someday. *dreams about it*

You know, when I heard that Rhys had some sort of history with Bella, I was wondering which story was that in until the Ugothlacy was mentioned, so glad that was a refresher. I really would have remained curious if it wasn’t for that.

Rhys Fitzhugh is definitely not the kind of person I wouldn’t want to mess around with. But, then again, I like the way you characterize Rhys in your legacy. He is really nasty from other stories, yet he still has a soft side regarding his family, I think.

Great update as always, Ang.
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by FourSeasons » Wed Jan 04, 2012 3:01 pm

Finally, I get to comment. :biggrin:

Spoiler:
There's a bunch of stuff I could say about this entire legacy in general, but I'll try to keep it somewhat brief.
First of all, I've never commented but I'm not a new reader; I believe I started reading back when Mary first showed up as a child. But now that I finally have an account, I can comment and tell you how much I love reading this legacy. :s_yes
I can't believe how much patience it must take for you to pose and set up the shots for each chapter, and to then write it all out the way you do is amazing to me. I hardly have the patience for the slapdash approach in my own legacy...trying to plan so much would drive me totally batty.
And the characters! Just out of curiosity, how much do you go by the sim's actual personality? Do you write what they actually do (to a point, obviously) or kind of...nudge them along? Because I love how you write them. Especially Zane, but I'm certainly not alone in that. It's just that there are so many ways that someone could have written him and done it totally wrong, but you manage to make him adorable no matter what he does, yet he's still totally believable.
Sooooo long story short, can't wait for your next update!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by SimSimity » Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:32 pm

Dun dun duuuun. :)
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by olddecembrist » Sat Jan 07, 2012 4:09 pm

Hai this is a comment :D

Spoiler:
So I actually feel bad for Mary. Idk, I think my hideously old-fashioned control freak self sympathizes with her or something. But pfffft like reconciliations and happy endings are the stuff life is made of.

Speaking of odd sympathies and none-too-happy endings--poor Bella is being played. The wording is quite clear, actually. I haven't heard of people who aged after dying, just saying. Bella making all those faises while Quinn's breaking the fourth wall was funny though.

AND INCEST IS WINCEST. Quinn-Emily is otp :|

Sad that the Summerdreams have all those painful stuff in their backyard and all. Oberon in some sort of otherworldly hell, Bottom wanting some vengeance, and Puck being terribly dense. When two people look at each other that way, there should be no more questions. It's not a sign, it's a freaking direction, darnit. :lol:

Rhys what are you even planning with that weather device.

And Tinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. D: I'm so bringing the ship into my other neighborhood.

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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by joandsarah77 » Wed Jan 11, 2012 4:41 am

I read it all over the last three days so now I am all caught up. :biggrin:

Spoiler:
I know you said about things being 'rough', but I didn't see anything resembling that. It was all very well done with a great plot that has been full of surprises. I stayed up way late last night reading all the chapters with 'PPP' Mary, and Eden in college and her marriage to Rhys up to having the twins.

Now I'm still in the middle of the Fitzhugh’s, so I'm not up to where Rhys does whatever it is that he does. But I know it's bad and I think from things I've heard around the place that he kills his family. I can't say I like that Rhys much at all. (Been trying to figure out why everyone likes him actually) But I do like him here.

I like Erin; I hope she and Puck end up together. But Quinn, I hope he wakes up soon to how he's being played. I can some very bad things coming. :s_cry
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by peasant007 » Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:44 pm

Hooray for more comments! I'm am so sorry it's taken me this long to respond. It's been a busy month.


Nicbemused:

Spoiler:
Erin didn't say anything about Rhys' past to Quinn because...well, I don't know why. I was really hoping nobody would drive their car through that gigantic hole in my plot :P I would say that A) She assumed that Quinn already knew and B) Quinn wasn't talking to her all that much because of the Bella situation, so whenever she did see him, it was never a good opportunity to bring it up. Yeah. That sounds good. We'll go with that *nods*

I agree that Eden went in too far with being opposite of her mother, and it was intentional. Thankfully the kids aren't terribly spoiled (because I, personally, find kids like that intolerable and I don't like not liking my own characters).

Also, I see nothing but tragedy ahead for a while.


Tragedy? In my legacy? I have no idea what you're talking about! *shifty eyes*

Thanks for commenting!



Heidi:

Spoiler:
You pegged Bottom's attitude right on the head *nods*

Yeah, I kind of look at it as "the look of shame," lol.

Only an outgoing Romance Sim brother with a LTW similar to his sister's would be cool with it :D

I can't wait until I can get Erin and Puck together as well :)

Yeeaaahhhh, Bella is bad.

Heh, I'm sure you DO have a pretty good idea where I'm going with all of this, but I hope you'll still be surprised by some of it as well.

Rhys has always been like that; he doesn't like being put on the spot (of which that's how he'd feel if Eden said how she felt about him). he'd feel pressured to say it back, which would piss him off. He doesn't say the "L" word, or any really deep feelings, because he feels that it would give the other person too much control over him. Now Eden is most certainly not the type to take advantage of him like that, but he's still a knee jerk reaction. Sad, but true. He only says it when he's on his death bed (or the other person is) or if he feels he needs to say it before it "becomes too late."

The next chapter is getting there slowly but surely :)



Animeangel:

Spoiler:
Ah, but Quinn is in love and he's all confused emotionally. I guess that's the best way to put it.

You're pretty right about Puck and Bottom with their immortality (or lack of in Puck's case). Puck will end up dealing with it a whole lot better though. And yes, Fate *does* work in mysterious ways.

Thanks for commenting!



SimsAddicted:

Spoiler:
First, thank you for de-lurking and taking the time to comment. Second, thank you so much for the incredibly flattering comment! I feel like I'm pulling all of my story out of my rear end half of the time and I'm really glad that it doesn't actually come across that way. I love doing the inter-personal stuff and quite honestly, I take snippets of my own real life conversations I have had with people over the years and find ways to implement them into the story.

YOur reaction to my version Rhys is also very flattering. I've always liked him, even when he was being the villain in his own legacy. But then again, I've always had a soft spot for the villains (to this day, Lillian still cracks me up). I've been very fortunate that Marina allows me to do with him what I am (and let me tell you, I'm constantly harassing her with the dumbest questions. Fun fact: Rhys would be left handed if he were a real person). In my story, I've been able to explore of his depths (GAWD that sounds so bad) because he is in the spotlight more than he has been in the past. I'm glad that he's a somewhat sympathetic character in my story. Somewhat. He's still an ass.

The staging is fun, but at the same time I look at my heavily plotted chapters with dread because there is so much staging. To be honest, I've made a resolution to not spend more than five minutes on a pose per Sim per picture. I"m so done with taking half an hour to find the perfect expression for a Sim's face, because quite honestly, that's what I spend most of my time doing. But, reading a comment like yours makes it worthwhile, so thank you again!

The next couple of chapters wil be interesting, to say the least and I'm looking forward to reading what you think of them. Thank you, again (I can't say it enough) for the awesome comment!



ShadowGem:

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Poor Zane indeed. He'll be okay eventually, though. I liked the Reaper Office as well (not that I built the thing). It's been interesting seeing what people have picked up from that scene. Rhys and Eden always make me laugh, too. I love them so very much <3

Puck isn't the first person that I said had an apartment, Rhys had one, too. But saying that Puck has an apartment was more for ease of staging. Legacy!Puck was cloned from Veronaville and made into a Dormie, and I didn't want to deal with needing other Dormies in the background because a lot of the stuff I film is in a photo shoot 'hood where (in this case) everyone is an adult. So I needed a place to film Puck that I had total control over, if that makes any sort of sense.

Heh, Christina was named that because she was from an unpublished Prettacy where I had named the generation she was part of after Mad Men actors/characters. She was named after Christina Hendricks (Joan, if you watch the series).

*snerk* Yeah, Bella is quite the piece of work. I ought to charge admission and allow everyone who is calling for her head a shot at her. And trust me when I say that she's going to get worse. You want to kill her now? Pffft. Just wait ;)

I *had* to have the Fitzhugh Legacy as part of the roundup. Without that legacy, there would have been no Rhys. The downside is that there wasn't much in the way in ANY of those pictures that showed Rhys being a "Bad Boy." And unfortunately, right after I published this chapter, Old Boolprop went down, rendering all those links useless, and some of those stories weren't transferred over. I'm just lucky that Rhys has been around forever and most people know where those scenes came from.

Wow everything is going into the tornado to be spit out it seems


Indeed :D

Thank you so much for commenting!



Jess:

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Were you distracted by the nudity Ang? *raises eyebrow*


LOL, no. I had pre-written ALL of the chapter before filming except for the opening page because that wasn't part of the story. So I copy and pasted everything onto the right slides and was LITERALLY about to turn it into a .pdf file when I noticed that I didn't fill out the recap page.

Oh, you aren't supposed to like Bottom, so don't feel bad if you don't. As for your other predictions, yeah, Puck will be fine with everything.

Quinn is oblivious because he's a hot-blooded eighteen year old male who has a practically nude woman on his bed. You really can't fault him for not thinking about everything in a clear manner :P As for a "suspicion upgrade," well, he's a guy. I even specifically asked Keith if men are suspicious and he informed me that, no, they are not. Not until they've been proven otherwise. Men really DO take things at face value most of the time.

Oh yeah, Erin *does* know what she wants. Puck is interesting to her. And the big reason for that is because he HASN'T grown up with her, if that makes any sense. She's known everyone she socializes with since they were all toddlers. So his "newness" alone makes him interesting. Then, on top of that, there's just "something about him" that she can't put her finger on.

Bella is self-centered and just plain stupid. She only hears what she wants, so she's not picking up on the wording that Lillian uses.

Aw, don't be TOO harsh with Quinn. Like I told you before, he's NOT going to see things the same way as everyone else. Keep in mind that you know 100% of what's going on, while he doesn't (but I can understand how frustrating it is when a character does dumb things like inspecting the strange sound in the basement when the power is out and there's a killer on the loose :P)

Rhys has a lot of faults, but he's always tried to be a good father. It's one of his few redeeming qualities.

I'm working on the next update. It's been a weird month for me, so progress has been a bit slow. But, according to my breakdown, I'm about halfway through the next chapter. So, [i/soonish[/i].

Thanks for commenting!



Big Lenny:

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LOL, I don't know why I felt the need to have Charles react to GTA, though now that I think about it, it's sort of a call out to the fact that as a Sim, that's all he practically did the entire time he was in college, often times to the point of near death *eye roll*

I don't know if you know this, but Puck only has 2 Outgoing points, so, yeah, he's going to be very embarrassed by the entire FAMILY's Outgoing actions (Eden has 8, Rhys has 9, Quinn has 9, Erin has 10).

*snerk* "Managed to seduce Quinn." It wasn't very hard. She's a good looking Sim who was only wearing slinky underwear. He's eighteen. She didn't really need to twist his arm.

When I first planned this plot line (over two years ago now), I had completely forgotten about Rhys and Bella in the Ugothlacy. It wasn't until I was talking to Marina about it that she brought it up and she mentioned that he wouldn't like Quinn being with Bella. It fit so perfectly :D

No, you don't want to mess around with Rhys. Not at all. He's "tame" in my story because as I mentioned in the end notes, he finally has what he's always wanted: to be married to an heir (seeing as he couldn't be one himself). But, one of his few redeeming qualities is that he's good with his kids, or tries to be. I'm very lucky that marina lets me do what I'm doing to him because otherwise things could have been a lot worse, and a lot more difficult to write (not to mention the entire STORY would have been different).

Thank you so much!



FourSeasons:

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I'm so glad you finally commented! Thank you so much!

Admittedly, I do spend an unfortunate amount of time staging these days. I haven't played my actual game since August (where Generation 7 have not only been born, but they are toddlers!). And even still, I have about three more chapters to go before I can go back to the actual 'hood and play some more. *sigh* As for the planning, I'm fairly anal about most things, so I can't NOT plan.

The Sim's actual personality really depends. Mary was incredibly Serious, so she rarely smiled unless she was doing the Creepy Smile (because she had 10 Nice points). However, Eden is the same way, though she ALSO smiles whenever Rhys enters the room. To be honest though, I do take a lot of their points and aspirations into account, but I don't really write exactly what they do because, quite frankly, the Sims themselves are boring; they spend a lot of their time skilling or earning badges. That would get boring to read after a while. Plus Pisces Sims seems to dominate my 'hood, so their personalities are all the same. TL;DR: I more nudge them along and characterize them as I see fit because otherwise they'd all be the same.

Between you and me (and anyone else who reads this comments I suppose), Zane irritates me. He's exhausting to write for. But at the same time, I'm rather proud of him and he's a lot stronger than he thinks he is. There will be some slight personality changes for Zane in the near future, so hopefully he'll be interesting for me to write for again :D

Thank you so much again for reading and commenting!



SimSimity:

Dun dun duuuun. :D


Indeed :)


HEINZ! *flails* Welcome back!

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The fact that you do feel bad for Mary means that I achieved what I wanted. I didn't want her to be a totally unsympathetic character. if she were given another chance with completely different circumstances, I'm sure she would be much happier.

Oh yeah, Bella is TOTALLY being played and the wording was intentionally clear. But Bella is stupid and spoiled; someone who always expects to get her own way.

I may or may not have Quinn and Emily set up, happily, in another neighborhood ;)

Oh, Puck KNOWS that it's a direction, but for the moment he's trying to resist it out of guilt.

Rhys what are you even planning with that weather device.


Heh. Actually, that's a BTS picture from when I was helping Marina film. I needed the weather on a Takemizu lot to be Fall or something, and to film on that lot (which was the Lucky Shrine Park, IIRC) I had to change it to a home lot and had Rhys own it so he could summon the people I needed. I needed a quick unused picture of him doing something vaguely nefarious, and that one fit the bill. So that's not even "my" Rhys.

Alas, poor Tina. I know, I know. You were one of the few people who shipped those two. But hopefully you'll still like where I go with Zane (and who he may or may not be paired off with in the future).

I'm so glad that you're kind, sorta back! Thanks for staying with my legacy and for commenting!



Jo:

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*\o/* I'm so glad you read my legacy! You are being very kind about my first couple of chapters. Admittedly, I laugh at Josh's diary, but the rest of it until I turned the story into a narrative one still makes me cringe.

I love surprising people! I'm glad you were! There's nothing better than seeing those "Ah-ha!" moments, I really truly mean that. I haven't done one in a while...

I won't ruin Marina's story for you, but I will say that he's not as bad as THAT. One of his redeeming qualities is that he loves his children and he tries to do right by them. As for why people like him, it's for a lot of different reasons. Mine is that one, I always liked the villains. Two, he sort of redeems himself by the time Marina is done with him in the apocalypse (kinda, sorta redeems himself). Plus there's the "Bad Boy" quality that people like. Would I like him if he were a real person? No, probably not. But as a character, he's fascinating and it's been a blast getting to know him better through my random questions to Marina :D

I like Erin a lot as well, and she and Puck are adorable. As for Quinn...*sigh* We'll see how it goes.

Thanks for bumping me to the top of your reading list AND taking the time to comment!



Again, I am really, truly apologetic that it's taken me so long to respond to my comments. The last few weeks have been kind of crappy. But, on the plus side, I'm about halfway done filming/writing the next chapter! It probably won't be out by the end of January like I had hoped, but if it's not, early February is a definite :D
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six - Part 5 *UPDATE* 12/0

PostPosted by LunaBeauty » Thu Jan 26, 2012 6:21 am

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After about three days of reading, I'm finally up to date!
I'm not one to leave a very long-winded comment. But I have to say that I love your legacy. I was actually considered giving up on my Apocalypse, because, in my opinion, it sucks royally. I've never been good at staging plots and events. But you've broken me out of my funk and convinced me to continue on with it.
I love your characters. They are so complex and three-dimensional, like real people. I'm glad they're not the type of sims who are pictured heartfarting all the time and getting into hot-tubs naked. They actually have depth to them.
I recognize some of the poses you use because I have those same pose boxes and even the animation boxes as well.
There were some points when I would just break down and cry and I'm crying right now just thinking about some of the terrible and sad things that happened.
I really hope you continue with this legacy. I really can't wait to see what happens next. Your sims, your pictures, your plots, everything about it is beautiful.
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six-Part 6 A *UPDATE* 2/26

PostPosted by peasant007 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:38 am

Oops, it looks like I missed a comment. I will come back and respond to it later.

But, I come bringing you a new UPDATE!

I hope you like it. Part B will come out soon (hopefully. Relatively. Yeah). Blanket warning for language. I hope you like it :)
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six-Part 6 A *UPDATE* 2/26

PostPosted by SimAddicted13 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:08 pm

Oh, great, a new chapter! :)

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Ugh, Bella is such a bitch! As if making Quinn hate and mistrust his father wasn't bad enough, now she also has to ruin Rhys and Eden's marriage... The things she said to poor Eden made me want to slap her. Hard. Eden could live to be 100, and yet she would still be a hundred times better than Bella. Geesh. With the life she had with her parents, she truly did not deserve the daughter-in-law from hell. I hope karma catches up with Bella soon, not only because of the Devereaux family, but also because of the way she treated Cassandra. Good for Eden to cheer her up, though, here's to hoping they end up becoming good friends.
Got to love Spencer's effort at making sure everyone have a good time, too, even though most people present hated the fact that Quinn and Bella were getting married. Cassandra's conversation with Achilles was hilarious, hearing about the opposite gender version of themselves would be weird to anyone. :D And Zachary and Ceres are expecting? Awesome, can't wait to see their little one.
Emily crying outside had me wondering...she hadn't been seen since she dropped out of college, right? Yet another character I feel so sorry for...I actually liked her and Quinn together even though they were first cousins...I mean, it's not like they knew they were related, and Eden and Karen are only half-sisters in the long run. But Lillian and Bella had to ruin everything, again. :( I hope Emily can get a happy ending of sorts some day.
What a relief for Puck to finally be able to face his feelings for Erin. He was being too stubborn for his own good, but telling her the whole story was the right thing to do. Erin is not the kind of girl to be freaked out by weird and unlikely things. ;) May they have a great future together. :)
The whole plan Lillian had to make Bella have Rhys' child and tear the Devereaux family apart is still making me feel uneasy, though. Can't wait to see how that turns out in the next part!
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Re: The Devereaux Legacy: Chapter Six-Part 6 A *UPDATE* 2/26

PostPosted by animeangel1983 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:13 pm

Eh, I'm a big girl language doesn't bother me one bit.

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So Puck finally got to see the light, or bolt of lightning which is essentially light energy...if I had my pan smilie handy Bella would be getting it for her vicious comment to Eden about how women afraid to age wear bright, daring colours to cling to their youth SHE DID THE SAME!! Ahem...maybe Quinn will see the light too, break the spell that Lillian and Bella put on him. So I still haven't placed Zane yet in my hoods but if the epiphany strikes me he may end up in Hidden City with my legacy and my Greek gods. Not sure how or why yet, but that's likely where he'd end up being. One more inter-universal jumper Solan has to deal with.
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