Thanks for the recap to catch that. So...Last chapter:
Spoiler:
Good to see Maddie using her martial arts skills for good rather than evil.
I recognize a few of those kids too, but not all of them. Are they all premades?
Well Sharon's a bit of a hypocrite...
Nice job on the dialogue between John and Maddie there.
Hmm, John didn't wait too long to tell Maddie his story, but she seems the kind of person that would be easy to talk to. Plus I suppose the spy business being his past life makes it (for lack of a better word) "safer" to talk about. Although they say you never really leave the spy life... Will it come back to haunt him?
Well Sharon's a bit of a hypocrite...
Nice job on the dialogue between John and Maddie there.
Hmm, John didn't wait too long to tell Maddie his story, but she seems the kind of person that would be easy to talk to. Plus I suppose the spy business being his past life makes it (for lack of a better word) "safer" to talk about. Although they say you never really leave the spy life... Will it come back to haunt him?

This Chapter:
Spoiler:
Nice shots with the face paintings!
Actually I liked the whole montage. Good way to show time passing for everyone. Bit of a nasty shock at the end though with old Lavender. I was happy for Maddie and all she has going for her until I remembered that she's acting kind of selfishly...
Possible typo? Slide 29: "He knew why Maddie wasn't close to his family..."
Okay, sparkles are a bit weird... The look on Gold's face is just perfect, by the way.
Pregnant Hex? Well that was unexpected... Lots of weird things going on in Maddie's hometown (which I totally remember the name of...not.
). This just keeps getting better and better! 
Possible typo? Slide 29: "He knew why Maddie wasn't close to his family..."
Okay, sparkles are a bit weird... The look on Gold's face is just perfect, by the way.
Pregnant Hex? Well that was unexpected... Lots of weird things going on in Maddie's hometown (which I totally remember the name of...not.
). This just keeps getting better and better! 





I've been meaning to comment on the Wrongways ever since you commented on my legacy back on the old site, but I didn't want to do it before I finished reading everything. But now that I have, I can say that I love it.
) I hope to see more of Fiona; I'm just not sure how the two legacies are going to work out through. As for Maddie, I can understand her need to get out of town, but...
Running away just isn't an option in legacies.




